Thursday, September 22, 2005
Outside, there were fireworks going on. Inside, little stirred.Outside, everything was noise. Inside, it was silent.
And she didn’t like the silence. She was sitting at her desk, and she was supposed to be typing furiously right now, but there was nothing to write about.
He sat behind her, on the sofa, reading. It was dark, and she had told him many times not to read in the dark, but she hadn’t the strength to tell him again now.
“What should I write about?” she asked.
He sat up and looked over his book at her. She had never asked him this. “Dunno. Something about ... dunno. Or maybe you should ... dunno, really.”
“You’re no good.”
“Hey! You’re the writer.”
“Just because you’re not one doesn’t mean you can’t have ideas.”
“Why should I let you steal my idea if I have one?”
“Hmm,” she said. “Let’s keep arguing. Might get an idea from that.”
“What’s it about, anyway? ... What is it anyway?”
“It’s supposed to be a hard-hitting article about shoes.”
“You don’t know shoes. Why’d you take it?”
“Sarcasm, love. It’s called sarcasm.”
“What’s sarcasm got to do with shoes?”
She started to explain, but then stopped and sighed. Then she heard him chuckling. She turned and threw one of her pens at him. It missed.
“Trajectory, dear. Paper-weights have better trajectories.”
“They’re also better at splitting heads.”
He looked at her for a few seconds, then turned back to his book.
“Maggots,” she said.
September 23, 2005 3:07 am
:)
i like the way you write.
September 23, 2005 12:25 pm
@Finchy: Thanks. Will post as and if I write more.
@Ms. Iyer: Thanks.
September 24, 2005 4:03 am
Free-association is good. Just a suggestion. The next time you free associate, think of the end for your story. Gives a good direction to the story, according to my experience. But than, that's not speaking much, I guess.
Nice style, keep it up.
Have left a comment on your Bush post (Liar autobiography) Please check. I hope it dispells your doubts.
Cheerio.
Born Stinger.
September 24, 2005 1:04 pm
Free association is a good method, and I usually use it, but this piece is not supposed to be a story. I don't know any more about the characters than I have written. I think that being a snippet is the point of the story, and snippets don't usually have endings.
Thanks for the biography comment. Have replied there.
September 26, 2005 2:14 am
Lovely post. Such "light-hearted yet very good" posts are becoming rare in the blog-world. It's become too serious. Have you posted others in the same vein?
September 26, 2005 11:44 am
Hey! Quite a delightful blog you’ve got there. Keep up the writing!
September 26, 2005 1:20 pm
@Anirudh: Thanks a lot. I was actually rather apprehensive about the reception of this post, so it's nice to see that people liked it. I have not written other pieces in quite the same vein (this is the first piece of fiction I've posted here) but I have written some light-hearted non-fiction, which you can read in the selected posts, especially this, this and this.
@Hyfather: Thanks.
September 28, 2005 10:06 am
Thanks for the tag. Will get cracking. I'm probably not gonna stop at one, either. It would be wasting a wonderful thing.
October 07, 2005 5:18 pm
Aditya,
liked it. But I thought she was going to throw a shoe at him!
If this is your first fiction here, what to say but: keep going!
cheers,
d.i.
October 08, 2005 10:58 am
Thanks, David. This is my first fiction here, but you can see some more on my website.