Sunday, October 02, 2005
This is my second attempt at the 55-word tag. The first is here.
On a related note, here is the shortest horror story ever written (although one might argue that the shortest horror story is actually “BOO!”). This story is by Fredric Brown, who was one of the writers who inspired me to write small stories.
The last person on Earth was alone in a room. There was a knock on the door ... [via madhoo.com]And here is the shortest story ever written. It is by Hemingway.
For Sale. Baby Shoes. Never Used.And now here is my story. It is something of an offshoot of another idea that I had. I was trying to find a format for it, and this seemed to fit nicely. When I wrote it, it was 59 words, and I had to fight for more than an hour to get it down to 55, because every word I deleted seemed to change the meaning. And then I realised that I had actually reduced it to 54, and I had one more word. It was like finding a million bucks. By the way, ‘Two’ is not the title, it is the number.
Two
There was once a human head for sale.
A comb sat beside it. They talked.
“What sex were you?” the comb asked.
“I don’t remember. I have nothing to look down at. Have I a moustache?”
“I don’t have eyes.”
“Let’s ask the shopkeeper.”
It tried to turn. Then it realised it couldn’t talk either.
October 03, 2005 10:56 am
This one is lovely.
October 03, 2005 11:41 am
Will you kick me if I talk about how this story symbolises the helplessness of the human condition?
;)
Appropriately quirky too. I like it.
October 04, 2005 10:01 pm
tut tut, this just gets more and more morbid. let me go out and find some cheerful stuff right away!
October 05, 2005 1:20 am
@Anirudh: Thanks.
@Aishwarya: Thanks, and while I, as the writer of the story, am prohibited from being too pompous about it, you, as a reader, are not. So I accept your interpretation. :)
@Charu: It's actually rather weird - I have written three 55 stories as yet (two of which have been posted), and all of them qualify as morbid. This calls for some thinking. But the next post (which I will post before the 3rd story) will be more cheerful, I promise.
October 20, 2005 12:21 pm
I like this one.
Btw, I responded to your comment on my blog re: Neil Gaiman/Violent Cases.
October 20, 2005 12:26 pm
Thanks. This one's my personal favourite yet (out of the 55-word stories), so every comment pleases me immensely.
January 27, 2007 1:57 pm
Great job done, keep it up!with the best regards!
January 31, 2007 9:03 am
Great site, I am bookmarking it!Keep it up!
With the best regards!
Frank